After finishing are first draft of are opening sequence we need to make some changes as are first draft is not perfect. After a discussion we decided.
Firstly we should improve the task by adding in more creative shots because currently as a group we feel we dont have enough creative shots in our opening sequence such as a high angle when two characters are talking. We could add more objects to try and make it more creative.
We could also improve the voiceovers in the scene as they are unclear and you may not catch what is said. We could change this by adding in a better voice that is clearer but still sounds threatening otherwise the whole mood is ruined.
We could improve the text effects on the task although their is currently already text in our scenes as all it does is fade in and out which doesn't improve the scene in any way. We could try and get a better transition for the text so it better in the scene .
We did not use many effects such as black and white and this could work good for us.
We didn't really consider rule of thirds so it will be good to change some shots to make sure they include the rule of thirds
Some of the music effects clash i think we need to change some so they dont clash.
In our scene their is clothes in the background we need to change this.
We need to edit out some shots where the camera shakes.
Add lightbulb effect and smash.
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